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A valkyrie and a kunoichi taking a bath together... this must be heaven. Praise the lord.

^^ hope you like it.

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Andreya and Belen © :iconthesolwing:
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First off, let me start by saying...

HOORAY! You finally fixed the head proportion problem! I'm gonna stand up and clap for you now.

Okay, enough clapping.

Your proportion work has greatly improved. I'm still seeing some of those odd bruise textures I've seen in your work before, but the placement here, on the knee, breast and butt-cheek makes them seem more like highlights than just bruises.

The expression on the darker-skinned babe is nice, a quiet, smouldering lust, but the the red-head's emotions are less clear. She almost seems like she's stoned, or else facing the brown beauty's attentions with the forced stoism of a hooker who isn't very happy with the situation, but is hanging in there for the sake of netting another few bucks.

Additionally, the action, especially of the red-head's right arm, is confused and chaotic. Where did her hand go? Into the cleaveage? Or is she just groping underneath? The over-lapping brownie's arm and soap bubbles hide this. Plus, the way her arm bends around her boob makes it seem like she's made of rubber.

Glad to see you're improving, and I hope you will continue.
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UseTheBrakes Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
I've heard of valkyries, but that other name...hey what's up, Japan?
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Lucky-JJ Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol
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UseTheBrakes Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
And the Valkyrie needs food badly.
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TheSolWing Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
si,definitivamente una chcia nija y una Valkyria son señales de algo celestial,o de que estoy a punto de tener un enorme nosebleed,por ambos lo sexy de la escena y de que Belen me vaya a romper la nariz por interrumpir su baño con Andreya XD

me encanto me regalo hermano!,primer dibujo ecchi de mis oc juntas!:la:
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Lucky-JJ Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^ me alegro te haya gustado, amigo mio. Lo mereces.
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zenki1389 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ALELUYA HERMANO!!!!
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Lucky-JJ Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aleluya!!
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Gin-Ichimaru-sama-x3 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:3 Love the look of the green-eye girl with the (¬^¬) look XD Adorable.
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Lucky-JJ Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^ thanks.
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Gin-Ichimaru-sama-x3 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:3 yw!
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